Hi Aaron,
I love your story and I thought you leave a very good and a very bad ending. Good in the sense that you leave a tail (the taxi driver) so that to write a sequel is easy to start with. Bad in the sense that I hate strawberry shake, a typical English educated, thought that she is the whole world, petty small woman. I wanted Garf to end with a Chinese educated, loving and encompassing all good element of a traditional Chinese teaching girl who is tolerent, love-consistent (is there such a word? Sorry, i'm a Chinese helicopter), considerate and ... (aiya, all the good virtue lah).
~ ~ GEISHA ~ ~
19th November 1991
Yo! Aaron,
Glad to say I took notice of Books and Stories folder, Sad to say I only notice it quite recently to catch the last few episode of 'Strawberry Shake'. Is there anyway that I can gain access to it or can you mail it to me? I would really like to finish the story instead of beginning it halfway.
One more word to add: A story need not have to be happy or sad, or even an end as a conclusion. Life, unlike stories, carries on even when one parted with his beloved. Emotions will fade....
sigh....
Derek
20th September 1992
*Sigh* what a lovely story... reflects part of my life...the first few episodes that is. I loved it, Aaron. *applause* *applause* Sure brings back memories.
Atreiyu....
"wahhhhhh...."
20th September 1992
PS: wanna play squash on thursday? Dr Lam joined the IT students last thursday...maybe we will make it a habit to kill some tutors on thursdays from now on. *evil grin*
ahoy,
*thunderous clap* *clap* *clap* standing ovation! banners! ribbons! balloons! *clap* *clap* *clap* tears! laughters! Cheers!
Strawberry Shake IS GREAT! it's really an un-exitable story. Thanks for sharing it, again(yup, i've read it once, this is the second time, and still great.)
erm, would u write anymore stuffs? pls put 'em up if u do, okay? *grin*
"nObutS"
p.s. hey, never mind the part i dunno u personally alrite?
26th September 1992